From version < 7.1 >
edited by ukat
on 2021/08/27 09:58
To version < 7.2 >
edited by eggBread
on 2022/07/05 02:45
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Change comment: Changed wording of some phrases and grammar fixes

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19 -This page provides general resources all around Catrobat's apps. They enable you to develop games and animations directly with your phone. You just have to stick bricks together!
19 +This page provides general resources about Catrobat's apps. They enable you to develop games and animations directly from your phone. You just have to stick bricks together!
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22 22  {{video url="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BHe2r2WU-T8&feature=emb_logo" height="200"/}}
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31 31  = Brick Documentation =
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33 -Program with the ease of playing lego? The coding blocks do just that. With the help of them it's very easy to build your own programs.
34 +Programming with the ease of playing with Lego? The coding blocks do just that. With their help, it's very easy to build your own programs.
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46 46  = Formula Editor =
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48 -Without formulas, programs would be unthinkable. They help to express what you actually want from the computer.
49 +Without formulas, programs would be unthinkable. They help express what you actually want from the computer.
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99 -= Starterprojects =
100 += Starter Projects =
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101 101  Do you want to see some finished projects? Here you can find some projects for the categories "Games", "Animation", "Interactive Art and Stories" and "Music and Dance". Download these starter projects, take a look at the code and modify it to your taste.
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147 147  = Education =
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149 -You are a teacher o Catrobat? You wanna find out about educational resources?
150 +Do you teach with Catrobat apps? Want to find out about educational resources?
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